Start with the logline. Penn, the Better Draft reader, gives you an honest take on it in about ten seconds, no email, no account. Then send the pages, from whichever device has the script, and Penn leaves margin notes on the first ten, pinned to the lines they are about. If you want the rest, the Full Read is $19.
PENN ON YOUR LOGLINE
Reading the logline.
Penn reads your first ten and pins notes to the lines. The notes come back by email in about five minutes, with a link to this page so you can send the script from whichever device has it. No account, no card.
The link to this page is in your inbox. Open it on the computer with the script, paste or upload the whole thing, and Penn's notes on the first ten pages come back by email in about five minutes.
Send the whole script, not just ten pages. Penn reads the opening with the whole thing in view, and we keep the script so the Full Read can start the moment you pay, no second upload. Your pages are never used to train anything, and the results page has a link that deletes the script from our servers whenever you like. One free sample per writer a week.